Escape From Kraznir

In the year 100,000,000,000,021 BC, there where a group of warriors that were on a mission. The names of the warriors were Sharksie the watermelon shark: their leader, Author the Dwarf, LittleJane the hobbit, Touchfire the wizard and Sarason the warrior.

Chapter 1

They just got the documents and files they needed to get food from the food storage, Than they when into this dark and misstey room. At the entry door there was a guard, Sharksie shoot a watermelon he hit the guard right in the back of the head.
“Good shot Sharksie” said Touchfire.
Sharksie shootout another watermelon in the air. BOOM!

Their they went into the food store but there was another garud this on was big and it was staring right at them… Sarason first reaction was to run, so she at him. He hits her away she gets up and run again this time he pick her up and through her at the wall crash. Author pick him up and threw him with the guard dogs they when mad with biting him.

They quickly ran and got all the food they needed, but they were to load 20 soldiers and 10 guard dog were standing in front of the tunnel. Then Sharksie had a idea, he shoot a huge tsunami and wiped them all away! They ran for they tunnel and escaped for Slinsil.

What they don't know was that there were hidden guards in the tunnel and they were all capture! In the sell the bars had a britty big gap, sines Littlejane was so small she slided out of the sell. She picked the rest of the locks. They had no more dogs so the manage to get out. They escape the realized it was night so they spend the night on a cliff edge.

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